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Italian Delights

January 7, 2013 By Michelle Matthews-Calloway 15 Comments

Thursday I mentioned that I want to start working on a book.

I’m toying with the idea of expanding the story line and featuring the characters I used last year in a writing prompt. The prompt was posted by the moderator of an online writing group I’m a member of.

These were the guidelines:

SHORT STORY – 1000-2000 words

Deadline – July 3rd, 2011

TOPIC: July 4th

RULES:

1. NO FIRST PERSON (example I, me, my)

2. Do not go over 2000 words

3. Do have a PLOT

4. Do leave it hanging

5. Nothing sexually explicit. We aren’t doing porn, thanks

6. FINALLY: You must use these ten words at least once somewhere in your story:

BOY, DODGE, INTRINSIC, INEVITABLE, VALUABLE, ORANGE, SPACESHIP, CHEESECLOTH, FIREWORKS, ANIMAL

This is the story I submitted. Please give me your opinion.

Italian Delights

Alexa looked nervously around the room and compared her attire to that of the other ladies.

She’d worn dressy jeans with a bright orange linen tunic. Originally she’d planned to wear an animal print blouse, but later decided against it because she thought it would look too busy. Even though it was the 4th of July, she definitely didn’t want to go with a red-white-and blue color scheme – that was way too cheesy. Stilettos were normally her shoe of choice, yet this time she’d opted for low-heeled, caramel-colored leather mules. The brochure for the three-hour cooking class cautioned attendees to wear comfortable shoes. Be stylish – not stupid, Alexa had said to herself when she pushed past boxes of high heels and settled on the mules. Besides, she didn’t want to look like she was trying too hard. She’d completed her outfit with large hoop earrings in yellow gold. Alexa hoped the outfit looked as good on her as it had on the store mannequin.

After scanning the other women’s outfits, Alexa was satisfied that she’d been able to dodge the “overdressed” bullet and achieved the look she desired. “Less is more!” Mama always said, and this time Mama was right.

Alexa sighed inwardly. Mama never said there’d be days like this, she thought. She was 32 and still single. Born and raised in Pensacola, Florida, Alexa had graduated from Florida A & M University with a bachelor’s of science in marketing. She’d landed a job with Texas Instruments and moved to Dallas right after graduation.  Five years later she’d marched across the stage at Texas Women’s University, MBA in hand. That degree had afforded her a valuable and enviable amount of leverage, and she’d used that leverage to climb the ranks of her company.  Alexa loved learning; for her it was an intrinsic quality. Setting her sights on a PhD was inevitable. With her fast-paced work environment, enrolling in online classes at the University of Phoenix seemed like the perfect solution.

What good is it to have a wonderful career, a ton of education, and no man? Alexa thought ruefully.

Well, that’s why you’re here, Alexa Renee’ Patterson, she said to perk herself up.  Alexa received e-mail updates from five popular dating blogs and read them religiously. She’d learned that she had allowed her career and educational pursuits to consume the majority of her time and attention, leaving her little to no room for a social life or dating.

“Ladies, you have to get out to where the men are! A good man won’t drop down out of the sky in a spaceship,” the bloggers admonished.

One blogger whom Alexa greatly admired swore that she met her dream man at a cooking class. When the Whole Foods Market Alexa frequented started offering Monday night cooking classes, she viewed it as a sign and paid for a month of classes. The first Monday in July was the 4th, but the store held to the schedule, so here she was. Alexa thought it was an interesting way to spend the holiday. Tonight’s theme: Italian Delights.

Alexa scanned the room again, this time to see if any men were present. Three men were in attendance; two White and one Asian. One of the White men was with a woman who was obviously either his wife or girlfriend; ditto for the Asian man. The other White guy’s back was turned to her so Alexa couldn’t see his face. She definitely couldn’t miss his blonde hair or his height, though.  He was at least five or six inches taller than the other two men. Eyes narrowing slightly, Alexa looked around at the other people in the class. Suddenly, she realized that she was the only Black person in the entire room.

Oh boy! so much for meeting a man, she thought.

“Everybody partner up,” the stout, bearded chef with “Bob” printed on his name tag said cheerfully.

OH. NO! Alexa thought. She’d tried to get one of her three home girls to come with her, but each had refused.

“Cooking classes? You’re taking cooking classes – for a month??!” Carmen had exclaimed.

“They’re only from 6:00 p.m. to 9:00 p.m., so come on,” Alexa wheedled.

“Um, I think I’ll be b-busy,” Carmen stammered.

“Alexa, are you sure that’s a good way to meet real men?” Robin had said doubtfully. “What kind of men take cooking classes???”

“Girl, I’m not tying up my Monday nights taking some freakin’ cooking classes,” Valerie, Alexa’s bestie, had snorted. “I already know how to cook. But you knock yourself out, though!”

So here she was, in a cooking class without another brown face in the place – and no partner. Great, Alexa thought. She could hear Carmen, Robin, and Jackie hooting now!

She squared her shoulders and looked around bravely. The classes were limited to 10 and excluding the instructor, 10 people were present. She would be paired with somebody.

Bob peered at her name tag. “Um, Alexa? Gary here doesn’t have a partner. Why don’t you two partner up?”

“Gary” turned out to be the tall blonde. Alexa looked up and stared into a pair of deep blue eyes. Gary’s face reminded her of Harrison Ford in the first Raiders movie. He was even built like Harrison Ford. Goodness! Why was her heart pounding?

“I’d love to be your partner,” Gary said, his eyes twinkling. “Do you mind?”

“Why, not at all,” Alexa heard herself saying. Gary towered over her petite, five feet, one-inch frame, but she didn’t care. A little dazed (and more than a little breathless) she forced herself to listen to the instructor.

“Tonight’s theme is ‘Italian Delights,’” Bob boomed. “We’re going to make rigatoni with sausage, peas, and fresh ricotta. Now, ricotta is a delicious, creamy cheese. We’re going to make this dish just the way they do in Italy, which means we’ll strain the ricotta cheese through something called cheesecloth. . . . “

The rest of the class was a blur. Alexa and Gary laughed, talked, and cooked together like they’d known each other for years. The highlight of the class was sitting down to eat the meal, complete with a wine paring, after everything was prepared.

Gary lifted his glass of wine and turned to Alexa for a toast. “To a wonderful cooking class, with the best partner a guy could hope for,” he said, looking Alexa directly in the eyes. She nodded happily, and raised her glass in return.

Gary’s eyes didn’t leave her face. “I hope you don’t think I’m being presumptuous, but I really don’t want this evening to end. Class is over in about 15 minutes; would you like to go for coffee? The Starbucks on McKinney Boulevard stays open until midnight.”

Wow! Alexa thought. She felt the same way Gary did; she also didn’t want the evening to end.  She had never imagined that she’d ever feel attracted to a man who wasn’t Black, but the chemistry between she and Gary was undeniable. She could follow her head and hold on to old patterns of thinking, or she could follow her heart and launch out into the deep. Alexa already knew the answer.

Inwardly, Alexa took a deep breath, and jumped.  “Of course,” she said, smiling warmly. “I’d love to.”

Three hours later, Alexa was quite assured that she hadn’t jumped alone.

“When I saw you, it was like real fireworks went off,” Gary said. “I tried to see if you were there with someone. You didn’t notice, but I maneuvered my way around the room so I could be your partner.”

They talked, and laughed, and talked some more. This would be the first interracial relationship for each of them. They decided to take things slow, enjoy their time together, and see where things led.

Gary walked Alexa to her car and made her promise to call and let him know she’d arrived home safely. Once on the freeway, out of his sight, Alexa shivered. What would her home girls say???

~~~~~~~

Incredulous that Alexa followed through and went to the cooking class – and actually met a “real” man – her posse of three made sure to get every little detail before weighing in on the prospect of her dating interracially. Their responses ranged from yes, to maybe, and hell no.

“Girl, does he have a brother???” Carmen squealed.  “ I’ve wanted to swirl for the longest. Tell Mr. Gary to hook a sista UP!”

“ Hmm . . . Alexa, I don’t know about this,” Robin said reluctantly. “I guess I’m happy for you, but I’m worried at the same time. Are you sure this is what you want to do???”

Telling Carmen and Robin was a piece of cake compared to telling Valerie.

“Aw hell, Alexa, this is what I get for letting you go to some lily-white cooking class by yourself!” Valerie exclaimed. “You met some White dude and came back crazy. It will never work!”

WHOA, Alexa thought. She could definitely understand Carmen’s desire to hop on the interracial dating bandwagon. Why not be willing to try a different dating option? She could even understand Robin’s reluctance; she wanted Alexa to exercise caution because she didn’t want her to get hurt. Those responses made sense.

But Alexa was stymied by Val’s reaction. Why did Valerie say Alexa had to be “crazy?” And why did Val automatically think it wouldn’t work?

Valerie had a laundry list of reasons why: Too many cultural differences. His family and friends wouldn’t accept her. It would be too uncomfortable for Alexa to fit into “his” world, and him in “hers.” White boys can’t get-it-on like brothers can.

And the clincher?

“Who the hell do you think you are, anyway?”Valerie said.

‘Who the hell do I think am?’ Alexa thought.

What???!!!

“Val, who do YOU think I think I am???” Alexa asked angrily.

They stood there facing each other, hands clenched into fists. Alexa was amazed at the incredible amount of negative energy in the room. She was also amazed at the depth of the feelings she was experiencing. Alexa wanted what Val and any other woman wanted – a good, solid relationship with a wonderful man. If Gary fit the bill, then why should his being White present a problem to Val or anyone else?

“Alexa, the hell if I know who I think you think you are,” Valerie said, exasperated. “That’s why I asked you!”

They glared at each other; breathing heavily, faces full of fury. Suddenly, inexplicably, the foundation of their friendship, which had been rocky mere moments prior, carried them into a safe, familiar place.

They both burst out laughing.

“Girl, you’re always doing something – you make me SICK!” Valerie exclaimed as the tension left the room. “How can you DO this???” she asked. “I’m telling you now – I’m not going to go off into the deep White waters – but you – Girl, you have to tell me how YOU can!”

Slowly, quietly, and with a lot of laughter sprinkled in, Alexa told her best friend that she was terrified – but determined. She and Gary had clicked all during the class, and even more so as they later drank coffee together in Starbucks, undistracted. They shared similar values; each possessed definitive goals, and wanted the same things from life. Of course Alexa had met men with goals and values. Yet, she and Gary experienced a connection that even in those first hours seemed to transcend their ethnicities. Alexa was willing to explore the connection further, and so was Gary.

“So Girl, THIS is what I want to know,” Val said slyly. “You sure you’re gonna be able to ‘do that thang’ with him???”

Alexa’s jaw dropped, and then she shook with laughter. Leave it to Valerie!

Before Alexa could muster up a response, her cell phone rang. It was Gary, and his voice sounded strained. Alexa’s heart plummeted. There was something about the tone of his voice that made her very uneasy . . . .

 

Join in the Fray: What do you think of this story? What do you think happened to Gary?

I’m blogging every day in the month of January in Blogher’s NaBloPoMo Challenge. Thanks for reading, and please leave some feedback!

Copyright © 2013 Michelle Matthews Calloway, ASwirlGirl, All rights reserved.

 

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About Michelle Matthews-Calloway

I'm a native Louisianan currently living in Dallas, TX. I have a B.S. degree in marketing, an MBA and a PhD in higher education administration. I love writing and research, and also thoroughly enjoy reading and working out.

I am passionate about cultural/ethnic diversity and interracial relationships; so much so that my dissertation focused on these concepts. I'm a widow, and I started dating interracially a few years after my husband passed away. In addition to blogging about interracial relationships and social issues, we also provide a podcast available on iTunes, Google Play, Spotify, iHeart Radio, Sound Cloud and Stitcher.

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Comments

  1. TheSwirlWorld says

    January 8, 2013 at 1:47 AM

    Angela, thanks bunches for reading and commenting. I couldn’t go into much detail on Gary – I realized I didn’t even give him a last name! 🙂 I had to stick to the word count AND use those weird words, so that took some maneuvering. I’ve got Alexa and her friends pretty well thought out in my mind. I’m just trying to decide what Gary’s deal is going to be. I’m kicking around some ideas in my head but I haven’t decided. The main thing I know for sure about Gary is that he definitely wants to be with Alexa!

  2. TheSwirlWorld says

    January 8, 2013 at 1:44 AM

    David, thanks for your feedback. I had to be vague on the descriptions because at the time I wrote this I was limited to a certain number of words.

    You brought up some interesting points about Alexa’s motivation and her dating history. That will be discussed in greater detail in the book. You’re right about the fact that sometimes two people are good people but just don’t “click.”

    Thanks for your comments!

  3. Angela says

    January 7, 2013 at 4:58 PM

    It’s amazing that my husband and I just had a conversation about interracial dating a couple of nights ago! Alexa seems like a character I’d like. Need more info on Gary, though. You’ve got to finish it. I want to find out what happens next. Get to writing already!

  4. Don says

    January 7, 2013 at 4:38 PM

    You’re welcome, Michelle! I look forward to reading more of this!

  5. david says

    January 7, 2013 at 4:26 PM

    well well well…i like it….its good but i think gary got some bad news so valeria can have a “i told you so attitude” but it aint over..maybehe is going through a divorce or his ex wife/child is sick….i also believe if she is not careful her friends as well meaning as they maybe will make or break this relationship(before it gets started) if she allows it…..character/personality goes deep with trust and understanding so im thinking you left the description vague for a purpose?…..personnally a change is good but from what motivation? because the last 3 brothers didnt act right or were her bad choices? ….dateing is dateing, its always a 2 way street and everybody can possibly get hurt and we must admit sometimes there is nothing wrong with either person but together it just doesnt work!!!

  6. TheSwirlWorld says

    January 7, 2013 at 4:05 PM

    Matlock, thanks for the feedback. You’re right; the word count prevented me from further elaborating on the descriptions, characters, etc. One of the main things I wanted to know was if the characters are compelling enough, even with the skimpy word count.

  7. TheSwirlWorld says

    January 7, 2013 at 4:00 PM

    Don, thanks for the feedback. I couldn’t go into those details because I had to keep everything within a certain word count. I’ll be able to elaborate on a LOT more on all those details. I really want to expand on the “fight” between Alexa and Valerie (FDLOL!).

  8. TheSwirlWorld says

    January 7, 2013 at 3:58 PM

    April, thanks for reading and commenting! Let me know if you have some suggestions for plot lines. I have an idea of what I want the “problem” to be, but I’m open to suggestions.

  9. TheSwirlWorld says

    January 7, 2013 at 3:52 PM

    Demetres, thanks so much! Any suggestions for plot direction?

  10. Matlock61 says

    January 7, 2013 at 2:32 PM

    Good stuff! I had to keep reminding myself of the imposed limitations of word length. I agree with Don, so I’ll move on. If I have any criticism it’s this: the first thing a Black person does when we step in a strange room/environment/situation is look to see if there are/where are other Black people in the room, then, and only then is there a check-out for the opposite gender.

    Minor point, but I’m just sayin’.

    When you expand this into a novel, make sure you go into the background of each of Alexa’s friends, as well as their appearance; we need to get a visual feel of them. Of course, a history of A’s experiences with Black men will have to be explored, as it will be central in explaining her motivations…

    Blah, blah, blah.

    Good short story, I’d buy the book.

  11. Don says

    January 7, 2013 at 2:00 PM

    Okay, Michelle, here’s my take.

    It’s well-written, the main character is engaging, intelligent, and open-minded if some person or circumstance gets a little wedge in that door first. But only a little wedge; she doesn’t need much of a push-off. The story is believable, which is a plus for contemporary themes. Hopefully more of the other people, especially Gary but also the three girlfriends, can be gone into later. There was nothing about Alexa’s appearance, other that that she is black and short. Is she slender, chunky, or somewhere in between? Is she a chocolate brown, high yellow, or blue-black? Same with Gary; other than his height and color, nothing descriptive. (Now that I think about it, my own story has similar issues to be corrected. Thanks, beautiful!)

    All in all, a pleasant reading experience that leaves me wondering what’s up for this potential couple. Did Gary have a bad parental experience becasue he wants to date Alexa? Or did someone close to him wind up in the hospital from an accident or illness? Or did he, Gary, get sick himself? Food allergies from the cooking class maybe?

    Stay tuned? Hope so!

  12. April says

    January 7, 2013 at 1:25 PM

    I really enjoyed reading that… I laughed a lot! I could actually relate to some of the characters… Val is funny! I don’t know… Maybe Gary’s friends had similar reactions as Alexa’s but it could have possibly been a bit more overwhelming for him. Men and women react differently to the opinion’s of others that are dear to them! I would love to hear the rest of the story… I hate to be left hanging… 🙂 LOL…

  13. Demetres says

    January 7, 2013 at 1:12 PM

    What??? You left it hanging! I love it!!!! Well written!

  14. TheSwirlWorld says

    January 7, 2013 at 12:53 PM

    Karla, thanks for reading and commenting. No, Gary is definitely sure regarding his interest in pursuing Alexa. Their sense of connection is going to be the glue that holds the story together. There are other things that can make Gary’s voice sound “strained,” and I’m trying to decide what I want that thing to be. . . . .

  15. Karla says

    January 7, 2013 at 8:46 AM

    Love the story and very well-written. I’m hoping Gary is not suffering from the cliché of doubt about the relationship. Maybe he received shocking news about a friend or family member and wants to talk to her because he values her opinion and logic.

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